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Prologue Page 2

February 23rd, 2013, 11:34 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
Why would I know why she's glowing don't give me that look
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SnowyFall
Posted by SnowyFall
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Yup it's not dead

Hahahaha, sorry guys about taking so long! I'm still new at this. But hey, dude, I just colored 13 panels and uploaded them to make up for it. See all that up there? It was all for you, reader. All for you.

And now the enemies are revealed! To be honest I had no idea who was chasing her until a random anon said 'a really powerful ice type' and well now there's a Glaceon and a Deino. I don't know where to the Deino came from, I just sort made the other guy a Deino ok?

And technically, that is my handwriting. I made it into a font. Yup, you can do that. Basically I cried when I learned that, no joke.

Hope you enjoy ^^

Posted at February 23rd, 2013, 11:43 pm

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Titan68221
Posted by Titan68221
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Glad to see its not dead :)
Nice page btw

Posted at February 24th, 2013, 4:44 am

Promising

The comic definately has potential, some suggestions about this page however:

1. The text baloons are TOO transparent, making the text a bit hard to read due to the dark background. Make them a little more opaque.

2.To separate a foreground wall from one further in the background, make the background one darker.

3. Try to vary the color scheme a little bit more. I know the page is set in a cave here, but brown on brown does not create good visual contrast. Try breaking up the background with, for instance, moss on the walls, small patches of water/grass, small streams of water pouring down the wall, fungi, or even different colored rocks and dirt.


Like I said though, this comic has great potential; I mean, two pages and already twenty three fans? I had to post ten before I had that number! XD Keep it up!

Posted at February 24th, 2013, 4:57 am

rym218
Posted by rym218
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hehe I can tell the alt texts are gonna be hilarious XD

Posted at February 24th, 2013, 4:54 pm

Maxfreak
Posted by Maxfreak
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Lol her face in the last pannel XD

Posted at March 9th, 2013, 2:41 pm

HKim
Posted by HKim
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Found this thanks to Rym.

I will include a link here in Pe2K's Monday Laughs feature!

Posted at March 10th, 2013, 1:48 am

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